What is the band score for this model essay? Thanks!

This is asking if you agree OR disagree. You can’t both agree and disagree – it’s not possible. The instructions don’t ask you to discuss both sides. So, choose your opinion and explain it in the essay – no other information is required. A balanced view does not discuss both sides, it presents a specific opinion. If you find that difficult to understand, don’t try. You can still get band score 9 choosing one side.
All the best
Liz

Unfortunately, I don’t offer essay marking.All the bestLiz

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Hi liz,
I just wondering for agree and disagree instruction, so is it okay if we agree in half case and disagree in other case, for example your essay. I read from other’s website, we should choose only one, agree or disagree. Thank you

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I just came to see one Discussion essay “Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion” . Can we follow the same structure of ” Discuss both views and give your own opinion ” in this case.

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hello Liz,
I don’t understand when i should present only my opinion and when to present both sides
For example in the above essay the questiom was ” to what extend do you agree?”
But the model answer he gave the point of view but also discussed both advantages and disadvantages.

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You are never asked to give a balanced opinion. You can be asked to give an opinion and it is your decision whether to go for a balanced approach or one-sided. Or you are asked to discuss both sides and give your opinion, in which case you discuss both sides and also give your opinion. Always follow the instructions.
Liz

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Dear Liz,
Thank you for your wonder insights and training videos. I am sure they have added value to my understanding.
please suggest if we have to provided balanced view; discuss both pros and cons, before giving opinions?

You can take ideas for essays but that’s all. You can’t memorise an essay to use in the test.

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Thanks so much Liz. My exam is this week and your lessons have been of immense help. I am however confused about something . In this advantage-disadvantage essay, I noticed an opinion was given at the conclusion. I thought opinions are only allowed in opinion essays. Thanks once again as I await your response.

Is this true for the essays? If so, what essays can I or can I not put examples in for?

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Because the essay question is about negative impacts of two different things: society and individuals. So, I think it is positive for individuals and negative for society. This is clear positive and answers the essay question fully.
Liz

This asks for your opinion so you just write your opinion. It is not a discussion essay.All the bestLiz

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“ever-increasing” means always growing. If you wrote your essay about a decreasing population it will affect you score for Task Response which relates to your ideas and answer. You could get a low score for that criterion. However, you might still do well in the other three criterion which could help. You must wait and see your result.
All the best
Liz