What is your opinion about my answer?

An IELTS essay should be between 270 and 290 words more or less. Your introduction alone is around 90 words instead of 40 to 50. You’ve also included creative, imaginative ideas – spider and webs – this is inappropriate for an IELTS essay. You’ve clearly got good English but you won’t even hit 7 unless you learn the right techniques. I highly suggest you think of getting my opinion essay lesson to learn the right techniques:

It means the whole essay is about your opinion.

Your essay will show a range of relevant tenses to show your flexibility and range in grammar.

What are the differenses of opinion essay and discussion essay?

hi Liz,
i have a question or you can say confusion specifically related to this model essay. you see question asked about how far you agree with the topic, in my opinion before reading the model answer most of us including me would have chosen a side either agree or disagree. but now my question is you’re partially supporting that’s individual benefits at the same time you’re also talking about negative impacts on society. so in this situation i’m not sure how to do this agree and disagree for the same topic… could we have gone the other way around like conventional way of choosing one side?

What is the band score for this model essay? Thanks!

You can agree or you can disagree or you can partially agree (this means you present a specific opinion, often called a balanced view but it doesn’t mean a discussion essay). No student should try a partial agreement unless they have been trained how to do it.

Is this true for the essays? If so, what essays can I or can I not put examples in for?

Ways to start an opinion essay | Jane Grech Dance Centre

hello Liz,
I don’t understand when i should present only my opinion and when to present both sides
For example in the above essay the questiom was ” to what extend do you agree?”
But the model answer he gave the point of view but also discussed both advantages and disadvantages.

Best way to start an opinion essay about internet - KTWO

Hi liz
I wrote your essay
And I realised that how much mistakes that I made in the past, now I will try to make ideas for essay. But I need your help to improve me. Because I have 1 month for my IELTS test.
Thank you
Yusuf

How to Write a TOEFL Essay Introduction: ..

It is about answering the issues in the essay question. There might be one or two. It’s about using relevant ideas and supporting them. It’s about how you present your ideas and your answer. See here for more information: . A similar page can be found in writing task 1.
Liz

This whole essay contains only opinion as you can see from the introduction.

How to Start a Compare and Contrast Essay

This is asking if you agree OR disagree. You can’t both agree and disagree – it’s not possible. The instructions don’t ask you to discuss both sides. So, choose your opinion and explain it in the essay – no other information is required. A balanced view does not discuss both sides, it presents a specific opinion. If you find that difficult to understand, don’t try. You can still get band score 9 choosing one side.
All the best
Liz

See my advanced writing task 2 lessons: . See the Opinion Essay Tutorial.All the bestLiz

How to Write an Opinion Essay | The Pen and The Pad

Hi Liz
I used your blog to prepare for my test which I had, thanks for making it easy for me via your tutorials
The essay question was;
Housing is a basic necessity. Governments should provide housing for those who cannot afford. To what extent do you agree?

first of all thank very much for this wonderful site.can i include example of professional networking site in the given essay?

Best way to start an expository essay is your opinion

“ever-increasing” means always growing. If you wrote your essay about a decreasing population it will affect you score for Task Response which relates to your ideas and answer. You could get a low score for that criterion. However, you might still do well in the other three criterion which could help. You must wait and see your result.
All the best
Liz